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Mother, do you think they'll drop the bomb?
Mother, do you think they'll like this song?
Mother, do you think they'll try to break my balls?
Mother, should I build the wall?
Mother, should I run for President?
Mother, should I trust the government?
Mother, will they put me in the firing line?
Is it just a waste of time?

Hush now baby, baby, don't you cry
Momma's gonna make all of your nightmares come true
Momma's gonna put all of her fears into you
Momma's gonna keep you right here under her wing
She won't let you fly, but she might let you sing
Momma's will keep Baby cozy and warm
Oooo Babe
Oooo Babe
Ooo Babe, of course Momma's gonna help build the wall

Mother, do you think she's good enough
For me?
Mother, do you think she's dangerous
To me?
Mother will she tear your little boy apart?
Mother, will she break my heart?

Hush now baby, baby, don't you cry
Momma's gonna check out all your girlfriends for you
Momma won't let anyone dirty get through
Momma's gonna wait up until you get in
Momma will always find out where you've been
Momma's gonna keep Baby healthy and clean
Oooo Babe
Oooo Babe
Ooo Babe, you'll always be Baby to me

Mother, did it need to be so high?
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Inspired by Pink Floyd's lyrics to "Mother" (one of my favorite songs of all time ;))

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Critiques


:iconhopeindespair:
First, I have to say I'm absolutely adoring the colour scheme here. The greyish tones of the skin, the blues, and the yellows really come together nicely.

I also love the sheer detail in the eyes, they're beautiful. The mix of different colours and value really show the swirling emotions this piece makes me feel.

There are only two things that bother me in the piece-- the first being the abstract blue apparition. While I do think it looks very nice and goes well with the piece, something about it is just a bit off. I don't think it's really blended well; It sort of looks just...put there. I'm not entirely sure what you could do to fix this, however. Perhaps a shadow or something? I'm not sure if it would take away from the abstract-ness, though.

The only other thing is the teardrop, and the reasons are the same for the abstract. Again, I'm not sure what you could do to fix it, sorry :(

Overall, though, awesome work :heart:
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:icontobythulhu:
Jealousy. That is my initial reaction. Why is it that some people know how to do this and I can't find a tutorial anywhere?

But...there is a comment on this one that says most of it: The eyes; and in them wonder, awe, fear. Most of the face is cut off, so the eyes truly are the window to the soul, showing a solitary tear, and a reflection that hints that the viewer is part of the piece, suggests that you may have the answer.

The composition is solid. The colors and shape of the abstract object has a reflective and metallic quality that is matched by the grey/silver tone of the subject and her piercings. The subject counters the color with a splash of the same blues around her eyes. The yellow serves to balance with the heavy eye makeup of the model, drawing the watcher's gaze back and forth between the abstact formation and the concrete eyes . The blues also enhance the metallic feel of the piece.

A simple and stark photo matched with a complex and vivid digital creation. Jealousy...my final reaction as well. :)
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:iconsparkpenguin:
that is... truly amazing work especially on the eyes. they're what i liked best about the original photo too.

the form over her forehead is just brilliant. and i really really like the color choices and coordination here.

i'd write a real critique because i'd love to extend the gesture/be part of the community but i'm just so damn chickenshitted. :P so that feature will remain as unused for me as news submission.

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:iconimaginati:
very cool!! i love the colors :) and the eyes are spectacular... amazing work, hun!

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~My declaration embedded deep under my skin
A permanent reminder of how it began
No hesitation when I am commanded to strike
You need to know that you're in for the fight of your life
You will be shown how I've become
Indestructible~
:iconaltergromit:
Man, from this point of view to be a mother sounds so *creepy* to me!... ...I'm not, so I didn't *break any dream* to anybody...
Intense image... :hug:

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:iconmeihua:
wow, astonishing, powerful image!

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:iconcinnamoncandy:
Beautiful work.

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:iconki-witch:
Lovely way how the liquid explosion has the same colors to the model's make-up, adds a monochrome feeling.

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:iconcinnamoncandy:
Hello! :wave:

You have been featured in my journal [link] and in this news article [link]

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:iconbrigettemora:
Nothing short of fabulous! I love it!

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:iconskittles52:
oooh kewal!

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Alicia Damiana
:iconskittles52:
i really really like what you did with her eyes and makeup

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Alicia Damiana

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Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XT
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Jun 1, 2008, 11:13:59 AM

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